Chapter 70: Announcement of the search for a child with a large sum of money
Chapter 70 The Announcement of Seeking a Son with a Lot of Money
Recently, there is a big temperature difference between day and night during the change of season, and I got the flu, so I’m not in good shape.
Starting from the sixtieth chapter, the plot of the next few chapters, the writing itself is not very satisfactory, and the reader feedback is also general.
The original follow-up to the manuscript, all overturned to give up, rewrite the new plot.
So the author fungus courage to take a leave of absence, today a shift, let the author fungus from the first chapter, and then run through the plot again.
The outline, fine outline, all again polished polish.
Estimated that in the middle of May, after the book’s word count reaches more than 200,000 words.
It will be on the shelves.
After the shelves, the author fungus will do his best to burst more, as long as the writing does not die, to the death!
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Also.
There are a lot of readers have responded, said the author bacteria too water, what question mark hit three and so on.
Author Fungus just wants to say.
This is not water, three question marks, three exclamation points, all indicate strong emotional aspects.
Light novels are all about emotions!
If the emotional plot, not slightly exaggerated, from the beginning to the end of the waves, what can be interesting?
And.
Most of the chapters of the author fungus, are more than 2200 words, more than 2300 words, the more water chapters overflow word count is more.
Like chapter 70, it’s 2700 words.
In a way, it’s also making sure that there’s enough dry stuff, and not reducing the effective plot because of the emotional word padding.
Besides, it’s free chapters now, and it doesn’t cost anything, so when it hits the shelves, the author fungus wording will be as streamlined as possible.
The author fungus knuckleheads are not much, but not so much as to deliberately water the word count to cheat money.
Now most of the books are sixteen or seventy thousand words on the shelves, the author bacteria this book, ready to say after two hundred thousand.
First let everyone free chapters to see cool again, don’t care about the water is not water.
After all, the water is more only moist Well ~
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And also.
This is the book merit setting problem.
A number of readers have responded that the protagonist gets merit values too easily.
Here.
Author Fungus explains.
First of all, it’s not easy for the protagonist to gain merits.
Count down the few times the protagonist gained merit value.
1. Slaying the tiger demon and the stern ghost increased his cultivation by a fraction of a point, without breaking through the realm.
2, The protagonist repaired the seal of the Underworld, and his cultivation broke through from the 5th Foundation Establishment Sky to the 7th Foundation Establishment Sky, while his qualifications and qi increased.
3. The protagonist provides disaster relief and saves the lives of more than 100,000 stragglers, while letting the stragglers find the courage to live and resettle their lives.
His cultivation level breaks through from the peak of Foundation Establishment 8th Heaven to the 1st Heaven of JieDan Stage.
Found it?
Every time the protagonist breaks through because of merit, he did something pivotal and great before receiving the merit granted by the Heavenly Dao.
How many ordinary cultivators, how many of them can encounter the rupture of the seal of the underworld passage?
How many of them are capable of repairing it?
As for giving disaster relief to the displaced people, the author fungus also explains: before there are clans and officers to provide disaster relief, but the people are not controlled ah!
The protagonist is the use of bran disaster relief, come up with work for relief, so the effect is particularly obvious.
Otherwise.
You don’t say a thousand spirit stones, even if it’s three to five thousand spirit stones, it’s not that much merit.
Normal clans with money and spirit stones would obtain cultivation resources from other sources, or think of other ways to earn merit.
After all.
There are millions of roads, and there is more than just one road, ordinary Foundation Stage cultivators, who would be willing to use a few thousand spirit stones to disaster relief to engage in merit?
Not to mention that merit is not necessarily get, there are so many spirit stones, refining cultivation can not?
The first thing you need to do is to get a good deal of money to pay for the work you do.
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Besides, why don’t other Immortal Cultivation forces monopolize merit?
How?
The beasts in the mountains absorb the essence of the sun and the moon, that is, they have the opportunity to cultivate into goblins to kill and eat people, and they can get merit by killing them.
You can’t stipulate that disciples, who capture the goblins back, can only let the ‘nobles’ in the clan kill them!
Even in ancient times and the real world, ordinary soldiers had the opportunity to get military merits ah!
As for deliberately cultivating demonic beasts and demonic cultivators and then killing them.
This kind of from a certain aspect, did have feasibility, but it couldn’t be done too much. To give an example.
When writing about the protagonist repairing the seal of the underworld, Author Fungus has depicted the protagonist muttering – find a demonic cultivator to break the seal and repair it himself.
Result.
Almost got struck by lightning, what does that mean?
Said tomorrow the rules of the Tao are very strict, if you deliberately cultivate demonic beasts, demonic cultivators to harm people, that karma line holding, you still want merit?
Not let you share the karma would be good.
Of course.
Reference to history and the real world, this cultivation world of heavenly rules, is not completely unable to drill holes.
For example.
If the senior management of certain righteous immortal sects are evil-minded, when they are cutting down the demons and eliminating the devils, they willfully do not cut off the roots and kill a hundred people and leave twenty people behind.
These twenty people escaped ‘by their own merit’, it’s not like I saved them, right?
I’m not taking the blame!
Then let these twenty people recruit and wait for them to regain their strength and become rampant, then come back to eliminate the demons and harvest a wave.
It’s like the ancient princes and generals raising their own bandits, deliberately forcing the people to fall into the grass and become bandits, and then when a certain time comes, then they will end it all in one swarm.
But they will never personally come out and have nothing to do with those bandits on the surface.
Even.
Even those bandits themselves may feel that they have nothing to do with them.
But wait until the time is ripe for development.
A wave of banditry.
The gold, silver and treasures that the mountain bandits robbed are theirs, and the heads of the mountain bandits can be used to claim military honors, and they can even use this to gain the support of the people.
Cut to this world and it’s the same thing.
It’s not like the Immortal Sect doesn’t have bad guys, it’s just that the setting of the Three Clear Immortal Sect belongs to the righteous path.
It’s the true path of righteousness.
Just like the Shushan Sect in Immortal Sword and Sorcery III, they take it as their duty to guard the world.
So.
Within the jurisdiction of the Three Clear Immortal Sect, very few of these sordid things happened, but it didn’t mean that other Immortal Sects didn’t have them.
Heaven and earth Qiankun, everything in the world, there is yin and yang, there is positive and evil.
All are not absolute.
The author fungus believes that the world background of a wonderful story should be diverse.
After all.
Even in the real world, there are quite a few staunch idealists, aren’t there?
Count back 100 years.
Which of the sage leaders of that era were not great heroes with hot blood?
In the subsequent chapters of the plot, for this aspect of the setting, the author fungus will also further add to it, so as not to make people feel that the setting is not rigorous enough.
Good guy.
Originally, I had a cold and wanted to be lazy, but I ended up writing a vacation note that was watered down to 2,300 words.
Plus 2700 words in chapter 70, rounded up to 5000 words.
I’m not sure if I’m going to be able to do that.
That’s a lot of exhaustion for the author fungus.
Anyway.
Author Fungus will try to fill in the settings of this book, and all of your reviews, messages, comments and suggestions, Author Fungus will also read and refer to them.
If it does make sense, the author fungus will also adopt and modify it.
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In conclusion.
Thank you to my brothers and sisters who have been supporting this book, really, a million thanks!
Here, the Author Fungus gives you all a set of Sword Vein Stunts!
[90-degree bow!!!]
[A bow!
[ Bows again! ]
[ Three bows! ]
[I wish you all good health and prosperity!]
(End of chapter)