Another chapter reviewed

Reviewing another chapter.
I’m now acutely aware that I’m not really suited to this subject matter .
I actually want to write something that’s lighthearted, funny, hot-blooded, and occasionally deafening to read a little.

Instead of writing something that can’t be this or that, and is watered down every day.

It’s the wrong route, and no matter how you write it, it doesn’t taste right!
The next book does not engage in this kind of, or return to my original good at it .
(End of chapter)